Topic: My SW novel..(no comments on that!)
I decided to write a novel.A book like Traviss or Barnes.Well here is the beggining.I want you to comment each time so I can get better. Here is the beggining...:
STAR WARS:THE EVIL RETURNS
THERE IS UNREST IN THE NEW REPUBLIC.LUKE SKYWALKER,NOW THE HEAD OF THE JEDI COUNCIL OF THE NEW REPUBLIC
HAS ORDERED AN INVESTIGATION DUE TO A VERY BAD FEELING CONCERNING THE DARK SIDE OF THE FORCE.
JEDI WATCHMEN HAVE BEEN DISPATCHED ALL OVER THE GALAXY TO INVESTIGATE THIS UPCOMING THREAT.
MEANWHILE,KYLE KATARN WITH HIS NEW PADAWAN BILL DEGARD ARE ON THEIR WAY TO ONE OF THE MILLIONS OF
PLANETS TO INVESTIGATE.....
Kyle and Bill were in a new republic transport/freighter,on their way to a remote planet at the fringes of the space."Master,what are we going to do on this planet?Cathar has been forgotten even by the Force!"Kyle looked at him seriously:"Don't ever say that again Bill!The Force is something that cares for everyone.It makes no exceptions.If it did,the Sith wouldn't exist..."Bill mourmoured:"Or the Jedi..."Kyle said:"I heard that!You young kids don't understand anything these days!I can't believe that Force sensitives could be so stupid!"Bill shook his head.Why,in all 5.000 Padawans,he was the one assigned under the guidance of Kyle Katarn?Kyle was not like the other Masters not at all.Actually,without his robes he seemed like a smuggler who had killed a Jedi and took his lightsaber.His ways were just so...Unprofessional.He showed no respect for his students,and he gave guidance like this:"When you see someone pointing you with a blaster,disarm him."When Bill asked how,Kyle seriously answered:"Cut his hand."Yet he was one of the best friends of the Headmaster Luke Skywalker.He may had unprofessional ways,but he always got the job done.