Topic: RPG - Coruscant attack

Right this takes place before episode 1 and you can be any character you want. The story takes place in a 40 storey flat in Coruscant, we will decide were the background is from then on, k? HAVE FUN! smile


Name: Ronun Sart
Age: 25
Weapons: Stun blaster
Intelligence:38/50
Expierience:89/90
Job: Delivery man
Vehicle:RI-67zo Speeder, delivery truck.

Ronun was tired. He had been working 13 hoursfrom 4.23am from then on. He had delivered 40 parcels during that time, and was quite happy. He had come home, and had decided to go to bed for at least 5 am the following morning. It was Tuesday and he still had days to go until he could relax. He changed into his sleeping clothes and was about to climb in  when the window shattered. Four armed men came in and fired at everything they could spot. Ronan was thrown backwards into a wall and was unconcuious. He could taste blood, then it went all dark.....

You're foolish words can never hurt me

2 (edited by Adeptus_Astartes Tuesday, February 5, 2008 2:59 pm)

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Name:Bareth Ooran
Species:Human, Male
Age: Appears to be between 24-28
Weapon(s): Vibro-knife, 2 WESTAR-34 blaster pistols,
Apearance: Talk blonde male, green eyes, needs to shave.
Job: Possibly bounty hunter
Vehicle:Starhwak 2b Speeder Bike
Personality: A rather nice person, unless he is after you. tries to be funny, though not always sucsessfully.

[i]The man in black fled across the desert, and the gunslinger followed[/i]
[url=http://lfgcomic.com/page/1]Interrogations are hard...[/url]

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( Very good character, astartes, keep up the good work  smile )

You're foolish words can never hurt me

4 (edited by Si Titran Saturday, February 2, 2008 8:16 pm)

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Name: Inyri Saal
Age... old enough but still young enough
Appearance: Tallish for a woman, 5' 7", long blonde hair, usually braided in outlandish style befitting someone of inherited money. Seen wearing lots of "active wear", luxurious jump suits made for action and style. Mostly white, but with insanely high heeled knee high boots.
Weapons: Vibrosword and a Modded hold out blaster. Doesn't even matter because of Echani unarmed combat training.
History: Comes from wealthy shipping and trading family on Corillia. Although wealthy, has never felt as if she has the respect of those of importance in the rest of the core worlds. She currently bases operations out of two buildings on Coruscant. One her personal residence and one down in "the works".


Sitting in her stark white office on the top floor,Inyri recives the comm call she had been anticipating.
Some one through a helmet says. "Target Aquired".
She replies "Yes. Bring him to me. The credits will be transferred to your account upon arrival."
"Yes, Ma'am." is the reply from the one wearing the helmet.

"Yes" she thought. This is a very good start.

Meat is murder...... tasty tasty murder.
"Suggestion: Electrocution works well. Evisceration and Decapitation are also effective, or um, so I've heard."

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Ronan was dragged into a large room with a chair, table, two flower pots and some pictures on the wall, nothing else. He was drugged during the Fight and he couldn't see. The last thing he remembered was a woman saying, " How are you , Ronan. Anything I can get you? " Then he blacked out again......

You're foolish words can never hurt me

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Bareth pulled his speeder bike onto the platform and jumped off. He had seem there was work here, he didnt care if he had to go after someone or guard someone, it was all work, and work is what he needed. Only thing he didnt like was having to work for some corperate executive, but he heard there was work here, and he wanted in. Apparently the person hireing was some lady named Saal. He stepped into the building and walked up to the front desk.  The secretary, a female Twi'lek who looked like she would rather be home reading a holozine, looked up boredly. "I heard that your boss might have some jobs available."  The secretary looked over at her consle for a second. "She already hired someone, but she might have something. Go on up and I'll buzz her." Bareth nodded and made his way to the turbolift. He go in pressed the button, turned around, and winked at the secretary. She rolled her eyes as the doors began to close and turned back to whatever she was doing

[i]The man in black fled across the desert, and the gunslinger followed[/i]
[url=http://lfgcomic.com/page/1]Interrogations are hard...[/url]

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Ronan awoke, he had been unconcious for an hour. The woman looked  up at him. " Oh, your awake. How did you sleep, fine, okay let me tell you how I'm going to kill you......" Ronan shuddered. This was not going to be pleasant....

You're foolish words can never hurt me

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wait, so this is before Episode 1, yet you can be ANY character you want? In that case, here's my dude:

Name: Jesus Christ
Age: 2,008
Weapons: Holiness, Cross, Bible, Shoes
Intelligence:?/?
Expierience:?/?
Job: Messiah of the Christians
Vehicle: Jesus-mobile

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Bareth stood, waiting, he had a long way to go up. The elevator music was, well, elevator music. He pulled one of his WESTAR-34s from its holster and began to spin in boredly. He looked out the transparisteel window watching the cityscape below him, it was getting a little later, more speeders were out. He looked back at the door, and saw a small holoprojector, the news was on, and he started to watch. "Today a man has gone missing, his appartment was with the window broken. His name is Ronun Sart, spelled: resh-osk-nern-usk-nern, senth-aurek-resh-trill. More at eleven." Bareth sighed boredly, and continued spinning the blaster.

[i]The man in black fled across the desert, and the gunslinger followed[/i]
[url=http://lfgcomic.com/page/1]Interrogations are hard...[/url]

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( lol I like your character fett 2 but it needed to be star   wars, sorry big_smile )

Ronan was outraged! He had been tied up and drugged and yet this woman was being nice to him..... " Can I get you something to drink, Ronan? " " No. " " Okay, just tell me when you need anything. "
Ronan had to escape somehow, it was just him and her and a guard. He needed to have some sort of weapon, to kill her then the guard, to escape..... Then he remembered the little stun blaster in his back pocket. They hadn't searched him at all before he came in. Ronan smiled grimly, this was the easy part.......

You're foolish words can never hurt me

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Bareth grinned as the door opened, still spinning the blaster. There was a man bound to a chair, and the woman he needed to speak of to about employment, he could only assume it was her, as she was the only person not tied up or holding a gun in the room. The next thing he noticed was how completely white it was in here. It was like a lab. The woman looked up, obviously not liking the idea of Bareth spining the WESTAR. She hadn't spoken yet, but Bareth was confident in his abillity to 'read' people Hell, even if I coulden't, wouldn't mind stareing for a bit.. he thought. "Hey, don't worry, the safetys on, theres no way this could go if its perfectly sa-" Bareth's blaster went off, the shot ricocheting off the apparently magnetically sealed turbolift car. Bareth almost imidieately dropped, and after a second the bolt hit something that it couldn't boune off of and died.

[i]The man in black fled across the desert, and the gunslinger followed[/i]
[url=http://lfgcomic.com/page/1]Interrogations are hard...[/url]

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( you had a short role in this astartes..... hmm )

Ronan had heard a man walk in and fire. Ronan cried out as a bolt of energy flew to him, he thought he was going to die, but miracusouly, it hit the ropes that his hands were tied behind, HE WAS FREE!...but dont get excited yet, he thought, you still have to take out the woman and guard, without them raising the alarm........

You're foolish words can never hurt me

13 (edited by cujo Sunday, February 3, 2008 1:30 pm)

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" is this comlink clean?" he asked.
the voice on other end spat instructions. Sunder listened and lit up a death stick.

name: A. Sunder
species: Chiss / Male
age 35
a consultant for the underworld, currently looking into a missing shipment job for the Hutts.
not armed, but versed in the arts of Teras Kasi.

one of the Hutts proxies issued the final instructions. "now repeat that back."

Sunder blew out a puff of death " On the 40th floor of the Sera lofts, got it."
the voice on the other end wasn't pleased w/ his flip response. Sunder assured him" Im a few blocks away, ill be there shortly."
trust me- i ran down that agent for the black sun, didnt i?"
silence on the com.
"ok, then. ill get back to you after i talk to Ronun". Sunder watched his deathstick burn down to his fingers and flipped it on to ground.
he stepped out of the cantina and squinted, no worries. just another delivery gone wrong.
he headed towards Sera lofts.

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( lets just say my blaster is still back, cujo, k? smile )

Ronun and Bareth shot. He shot first, killing the guard instantly. He fell to the floor. The woman tried to pick up a comlink but Ronan shot her. She went limp and fell to the floor. " She's not dead. " Ronun said. " She has been stunned. "  Ronan pointed to his small blaster which was still smoking from the shot. They nodded and ran towards the elevator........

You're foolish words can never hurt me

15 (edited by Adeptus_Astartes Sunday, February 3, 2008 7:17 am)

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Masterchief wrote:

( lets just say my blaster is still back, cujo, k? smile )

Ronun and Bareth shot. He shot first, killing the guard instantly. He fell to the floor. The woman tried to pick up a comlink but Ronan shot her. She went limp and fell to the floor. " She's not dead. " Ronun said. " She has been stunned. "  Ronan pointed to his small blaster which was still smoking from the shot. They nodded and ran towards the elevator........

(Bareth isnt working with you, hes up there to try to get a job from Si's character I'm going to post, but mostly disregard your, for the reason of my character not working for or with you.)


The hostage had somehow freed himself and just shot at the guard and the woman. Bareth pulled his WESTARs out and shot as the man got inside the turbolift. The doors shut before he could kill the man.Bareth looked over at the guard, who was obviously dead. He turned to the executive, who looked like the effects of the blaster were wearing off on her, and helped her up.

[i]The man in black fled across the desert, and the gunslinger followed[/i]
[url=http://lfgcomic.com/page/1]Interrogations are hard...[/url]

16 (edited by Si Titran Sunday, February 3, 2008 9:00 pm)

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Saal slowly got off the floor and shook her head to clear the last of the stun's effect from her. She was unsure of what exactly happened. The chair that was moments ago holding Ronan was on its side, and vacant. A look of anger and disgust crossed her face for a moment, then cleared. The inept gaud was lying on his back, unmoving and a few drops of blood around the corner of his mouth. She muttered a Huttese curse under her breath in frustration. Then she remembered the man that entered the office just before things went awry. He was still here, so it was obvious that he didn't come here just to rescue Ronan.

"What are you doing here?" she asked coldly.

"I've heard that you were needing capable individuals."

Well he already passed Saal's first test. He didn't seem intimidated by her. Saal by no means could tolerate a weak fool that would just advocate any asinine thing that she let out of her lips. But he interrupted something important, and someone would pay. That receptionist was sloppy. Sloppy would not be tolerated. Another problem that would have to be handled.

"Sorry that he made it into the turbolift. Ma'am."

Ah! There. Saal walked back to the desk, hit a few quick commands into the recessed keypad.
"Prove that you are capable. If you can bring that man back to me before he leaves the building you have a position. I have halted the turbolift. It is now between," Saal paused as she glanced at the screen, "46 and 45. Go".

Meat is murder...... tasty tasty murder.
"Suggestion: Electrocution works well. Evisceration and Decapitation are also effective, or um, so I've heard."

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Bareth nodded and aproached the turbolift shaft, which had been opend for him, he stood at the edge, and looked down, barely able to see the turbolift below him. Luckily there was a large wire hanging from the top of the shaft, it was in the center. He would need to jump to make it. He backed up, trying to figure out how much of a running start he would need.

"So, I never got your name."

"You could call me Ms. Saal, but I think Ma'am will do for now."

"Yeah, thats great, but I meant your first name."

"I realy don't see how this is relevant right now. Don't you have someone to catch for me?"

"Yeah, but in order to get down there, I have to jump from there," Bareth said, pointing at a spot on the floor infront of the turbolift shaft "reach that cable in the middle and grab it, without sliping or slaming into the far wall, and then climb my way down to the turbolift which is at least thirty floors down, so if any of the thousands of things that could possibly go wrong with this whole thing, I would prefer to at least know your name before I fall to my death in a turbolift shaft."

[i]The man in black fled across the desert, and the gunslinger followed[/i]
[url=http://lfgcomic.com/page/1]Interrogations are hard...[/url]

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"Are you serious?!" Saal shouted at the man. She was getting desperate. Every second of delay allowed Ronan more time to get away from the building and her control. She caved, if for no other reason than that she NEEDED Ronan back, and the faster the easier and cheaper it would be for her.

"Inyri Saal. GO! Bring him back!"

Meat is murder...... tasty tasty murder.
"Suggestion: Electrocution works well. Evisceration and Decapitation are also effective, or um, so I've heard."

19 (edited by cujo Monday, February 4, 2008 3:55 pm)

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Sunder had reached Sera towers and cursed the oppressive sun. he reached for the door switch and a late model speeder bike caught his eye. This wasnt a casual riders bike, it was modified. he put his hand on the engine cover- it was still warm. looks like he might be crashing a party.
He stepped into the lobby absent of anyone except what appeared to be a bubble headed Twilek receptionist.

"Hello there" Sunder approached the desk.
she glanced up. "Do you have an appointment?"
Sunder flashed a quick smile. " No, actually. I wanted to surprise Inryi, she and i are old friends back from our days at the Academy."

"Oh, im really sorry" the twilek smiled "she really cannot be disturbed right now."
Sunder continued to smile but he squinted his glowing red eyes to a menace. " Oh, no im sorry, you misunderstood me. What i meant to say is this is a pivotal moment in your life, it can end as you sit behind that desk or you can clear me to head up the lift."
she sat silently. It was plain to see he was not joking.
"your call" Sunder deadpanned.
"yes, go up she is on the 40th floor." the twilek sat with her mouth agap.
sunder hit the call button on the lift, but nothing. a metalized voice calmly said "this lift is currently off-line".
"looks like i have a few minutes to kill" Sunder lit up another death stick and turned toward the twilek...

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Bareth did not like the idea of falling about forty stories. But he jumped just the same. He barely caught the cable, and began the climb to the turbolift, he just hoped that his target wasn't waiting for him with a vibroblade, because by the time he got there his arms would be rather tired. He made it to the turbolift, and opend the hatch, dropping down with one of his WESTARs in his left hand and his vibroknife in the other. It was clear. That meant he needed to get moving.

[i]The man in black fled across the desert, and the gunslinger followed[/i]
[url=http://lfgcomic.com/page/1]Interrogations are hard...[/url]

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Ronan was puzzled. He had been captured at midnight, been gagged and drugged to a mad woman and then a smuggler rescuing him. He shook his head, and continued to walk home......

You're foolish words can never hurt me

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Inyri paced in her office, the body of the guard allready moved by another member of her staff. Seething she rang the receptionist's desk, planning on taking it out on the little nerf hearding Twi'lek. No response. Angry she decided to go and handle it face to face then. She keyed in a command on the desk, opening her secret personal turbolift, consealed behind the desk.

Meat is murder...... tasty tasty murder.
"Suggestion: Electrocution works well. Evisceration and Decapitation are also effective, or um, so I've heard."

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Ronan eventually arrived at his home, and got ready for bed. It had been  6 hours since the guards had captured him. He needed the sleep, to continue work in the morning. He slept.......

You're foolish words can never hurt me

24 (edited by JeDiEd28 Tuesday, February 5, 2008 6:25 pm)

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Name: Swift Jones
Species: Human, Male
Age: 24
Weapon(s): VibroSword and a Green Lightsaber
Job: Jedi
Vehicle: RI-67zo Speeder and an X-Wing
Personality: Very cool person and very humorous at times

LEELA: I know you like cooking shows, but you're a robot. You don't even have a sense of taste!
BENDER: Honey, I wouldn't talk about taste if I was wearing a lime green tank top.

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Masterchief wrote:

Ronan eventually arrived at his home, and got ready for bed. It had been  6 hours since the guards had captured him. He needed the sleep, to continue work in the morning. He slept.......

this is a considerable leap in the timeline and action. r we gonna skip ahead like that?
when answered i will erase this post and write my RP.

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