1 (edited by True Warrior Saturday, September 9, 2006 7:20 am)

Topic: Star Wars Dot Com Fan Fic

Here is an intro for an RPG Im starting at Star wars Dot Com (Mibas site) wink.

In Episode 2: Attack of the Clones

Obi-Wan walks down Kamino’s indoor city halls. The inhabitants of these corridors are mysterious and lonesome, a very necessary spot for a bounty hunter to lay low. “Right this way” Taun We said to the jedi. Obi-Wan was directed towards a large clear door that needed clearance to get through. “We will just need a strand of your hair to confirm your identity as a republican Jedi.” Taun We said with a calming tone. Obi-Wan was pretty sure that Taun We was safe to trust, her senses were calming and her mind was almost always cleared. “Okay then.” Obi-Wan picked a small patch of hair from his scalp and handed it to the Kaminoian. Taun We thanked the Jedi and slowly took the strand of hair to the accessing terminal placed to the side of the door. “CONFIRMED: Republican databank accessed. Jedi Obi-Wan Kenobi.” The access terminal spoke aloud to the two. “Lets step inside, to take a look at the clones…” Taun We said. “Clones?” Obi-Wan made a guessture. “You will see….” Taun We smiled at Obi-Wan and secretly tucked Obi-Wan’s strand of hair into her robes back pocket. They both stepped into the tube-like walkway and walked on….

1 Month later after the battle of Genioses

Taun we stepped slowly walked into the cloning facility with an eerie looking fellow following behind. The clones were all working very functional and training for future battles. They both stepped over to the clones functioning terminal, only it was different than all the other terminals there. “So, you tell me you knew the one named, Count Dooku?” Taun We asked the dark robed figure. “Yes……” He replied. “He was my…………..”assistant”……if you will….” The dark robed man never took his hood up or even looked Taun We in the eyes. "The force power generator you gave us, seemed to really help the new clones. They're abilities are like nothing I've ever seen before in a clone." Taun We told him while looking over the balcony. She wanted to make the man pleased of the clones, as she does with all her customers. “Rest assured…by the end of the month, there will be enough for your needs and they will be ready for battle, sir." The dark robed figure stroked his hands together. “good, gooood…….” Down below the two were almost 50 dark robed figures, more skinny and flexible than the man talking to Taun We. They all were training and were pushing things without even touching the objects. All in unison, the figures turned around and flashed bright red lightsabers in front of they’re opponents. They’re faces all resembled a man that was in Topica city just over a month ago. Taun We looked over to the man in the long robe, “Excuse me…….but what did you say your name was? Mr……..?” The dark man slowly turned his head to finally face Taun We. “…………Sidious…..”

Tell me whatcya think? Do you know who the clone's host is? wink

TW

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Re: Star Wars Dot Com Fan Fic

It's above average...not the best stuff I've ever read, but a heck of a lot better than some...great topic for an RPG, though.  smile  What will the RPGers be playing as?

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Re: Star Wars Dot Com Fan Fic

who ever they want. One person is playing as Taun We. Im playing as Jango(of course), and I guess someone could play the real Obi-Wan and Anikin.

TW

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Re: Star Wars Dot Com Fan Fic

Hmm, I always think it best to leave main stream characters out of RPGs. Mainly because someone will always say you're not portraying them right. They're fine as extra elements to a story though. But that's just my opinion. wink

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Re: Star Wars Dot Com Fan Fic

I have changed this into my own fanfic! The timeframe has also changed. Heres the next part...

"Im expecting them to do well in their battles, as was the host..." Sidious told Taun We. Tain we was about to speak when a mysterious man walked through the clear door. The man had green armor with a jetpack and a helmet with a T-shaped visor. He walked up to Taun We holding a blaster in his hands, as always. "ah, Boba Fett. I was expecting you here over an hour ago...." Sidious looked over to the mysterious masked man. "I had a "package" to deliver....." Boba Fett said in a cold erie voice. Sidious nnodded and looked to Taun We. "This Bounty Hunter was chosen to lead these jedi into battle." Sidious spoke with a cold voice. "Yes, I have met this......man before, as a boy." Taun We spoke while looking over at Boba Fett. Boba Fett's mind began to race, he wanted to kill her right there.........for betraying him and his father.......but he needed to keep cool. "Yes........we have met. Long time no see Taun We...." Boba Fett almost had a smidgen of anger hidden in his voice.
Taun We looked upon Boba with a small bit of fear, hoping he wouldn't become too angry. "Long time no see indeed," she said. "But now the clones await, I'm sure you're anxious to inspect them, as you'll be leading them." Taun We waved a hand towards the walkway that led down to the area the clones were in.
They all went down into the platform on a hoverpad. Boba Fett walked over to the jedi clones as the other two stayed in the pad. All of the jedi clones stopped and looked over to Boba Fett, as he stood his ground. "Dont worry, we programed them to obey you and never to harm you. " Taun We said in the back. Boba Fett couldnt take a chance from Taun We so he still stood his ground. "We've also programed them to know Mandalorian battle formations." Taun We spoke again. Boba Fett turned to all the Obi-Wan clones and spoke, "Alright men......attack position jujack alpha." The clones imediatly listened to Bobas demands and got into an arow shaoe position towards the enemy robots. The clones took out all their sabers and Boba Fett lead them into battle trainning.

TW

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