Topic: Ralin's Creations
I'm much more a writer then a painter, so most if not everything I add to this thread will be writting creations that are too small to have their own thread. Hope you enjoy
For my first creation here, I have his alternate scene to offer. No offense, but IÃ¢Â€Â™m tired of the cheesy alternate scenes that IÃ¢Â€Â™ve seen posted. LetÃ¢Â€Â™s put some time into making alternate scenes that are not only possible, but also something weÃ¢Â€Â™d actually WANT to see *ie no Palps dancing in G-string etc.*!
HereÃ¢Â€Â™s my contribution to said alternate scenes
Ep. VI Alternate Scene
The carbonite begins to melt away from Han Solo. He flexes his fingers slightly, he moves his lips gently, and then falls to the ground. A gloved hand grabs his shoulder and helps him to sit up.
Ã¢Â€ÂœRelax. YouÃ¢Â€Â™re free of the CarboniteÃ¢Â€Â a helmet altered voice says to him from the darkness. A voice Han recognizedÃ¢Â€Â¦
Ã¢Â€ÂœThatÃ¢Â€Â™s rightÃ¢Â€Â said the blurry green figure before his eyes. Ã¢Â€ÂœYour friends wasted a lot of time looking for you. They finally got smart and offered me more then Jabba was paying me to hang around this place.Ã¢Â€Â
Ã¢Â€ÂœI canÃ¢Â€Â™t see.Ã¢Â€Â
Ã¢Â€ÂœYou have hibernation sickness. Your sight will return in timeÃ¢Â€Â¦.. perhaps.Ã¢Â€Â
Ã¢Â€ÂœWhereÃ¢Â€Â™s Leia and the others?Ã¢Â€Â
Ã¢Â€ÂœNo more time for questions. Get up.Ã¢Â€Â Boba pulled Solo to his wabbly feet with one hand.
Ã¢Â€ÂœOh ho ho ho ho. Ah ha ha haÃ¢Â€Â boomed a menacing laugh though the chamber.
SoloÃ¢Â€Â™s face turned nearly as green as Boba's armor. Ã¢Â€ÂœI know that laughÃ¢Â€Â¦Ã¢Â€Â
Two sets of curtains flashed open, revealing JabbaÃ¢Â€Â™s goons behind and Jabba himself in front of them.
Ã¢Â€ÂœSo, the mighty Boba Fett betrays me.Ã¢Â€Â
Ã¢Â€ÂœNo betrayal, Jabba; itÃ¢Â€Â™s nothing personal. But either way, IÃ¢Â€Â™m taking Captain Solo out of here. It would be wise of you NOT to try and stop me.Ã¢Â€Â
Ã¢Â€ÂœNo one steals from me and lives. You should have remained loyal Fett. Now both you AND Solo will DIE!Ã¢Â€Â
Before JabbaÃ¢Â€Â™s goons could move in, however, Boba held up his hand. Ã¢Â€ÂœWait. You donÃ¢Â€Â™t think IÃ¢Â€Â™m stupid enough thaw out Solo without a backup plan, do you? IÃ¢Â€Â™m giving you all one last chance, stand aside.Ã¢Â€Â
"And why should I let you go?"
"Because of this..." said Fett as his left hand moved from around his back and revealed the Thermal Detonator in his grasp, sending most of Jabba's enforcers running for cover.
"HA" Jabba bellowed. "You MAY be stupid enough to try to take my property out of here from under my very nose, but NOBODY'S stupid enough to use one of those in an enclosed room like this. You're bluffing.......and a pathetic bluff at that. You donÃ¢Â€Â™t scare anybody any more, Fett. TAKE HIÃ¢Â€Â¦.Ã¢Â€Â
JabbaÃ¢Â€Â™s words were cut off with a mighty throw from Fett, who sent the detonator flying into Jabba's gapping mouth.
Jabba tried not to swallow, but the *Gulp* sound betrayed him. His eye's widened as Boba raised his hand to his wrist gauntlet. "Bye Jabba" said Fett with no more emotion then if he was about to step on a Tatooine dust-ant. Pressing a button on the gauntlet, Jabba imploded.
Ã¢Â€ÂœAny body else think IÃ¢Â€Â™m not scary?Ã¢Â€Â
The formerly employed goons stood in awed silence, staring at their slumped over master, smoke still rising from his head. One grabbed for his blaster, and was leveled by Fett. Several others then went for their weapons, forcing Fett to opt for Plan C.
Ã¢Â€ÂœDUCK!Ã¢Â€Â he yelled for Solo as he forced the other manÃ¢Â€Â™s head down. Pressing the button on his gauntlet, several explosives heÃ¢Â€Â™s hidden around JabbaÃ¢Â€Â™s throne room exploded, ripping into the surrounding goons. Nearly all went down from the explosives, and a few remaining thugs ran or were taken down by BobaÃ¢Â€Â™s deadly fire.
Walking out of the palace, Han looked at the shadowy figure walking next to him. Ã¢Â€ÂœThanks, Fett. I guess weÃ¢Â€Â™re even.Ã¢Â€Â
Ã¢Â€ÂœThink that if you wishÃ¢Â€Â he said without turning. Ã¢Â€ÂœBut like I said to Jabba, its nothing personal, before or nowÃ¢Â€Â¦.Ã¢Â€Â
Last edited by Ralin Drakus (Thursday, March 27, 2008 12:11 pm)