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Not too many poems here. Mostly comments...
Can't wait to see more.

27 (edited by Si Titran Saturday, February 16, 2008 3:49 pm)

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Well I do have many poems, but didn't want to overwhelm the thread or you guys.

terra, that is a sweet poem. I have a hard time with sweet, so i give you credit.

Walt Whitman was an american poet around the time of the american civil war. ( Mid to late 1800's.) He spent most of his career on a book called "Leaves of Grass."  I LOVE Whitman.
Fett_II, do you have a favorite poem or verse of his?

Meat is murder...... tasty tasty murder.
"Suggestion: Electrocution works well. Evisceration and Decapitation are also effective, or um, so I've heard."

28 (edited by JustDave Saturday, February 16, 2008 5:39 pm)

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Si Titran wrote:

Well I do have many poems, but didn't want to overwhelm the thread or you guys.

terra, that is a sweet poem. I have a hard time with sweet, so i give you credit.

Walt Whitman was an american poet around the time of the american civil war. ( Mid to late 1800's.) He spent most of his career on a book called "Leaves of Grass."  I LOVE Whitman.
Fett_II, do you have a favorite poem or verse of his?

Whitman rules, doesn't he. Not into "sweet" poetry either myself, I prefer when it's kind of deeper, darker. I like Nelligan. Some others too.

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Dark... ah then I will have to find those.... I do have many.

Meat is murder...... tasty tasty murder.
"Suggestion: Electrocution works well. Evisceration and Decapitation are also effective, or um, so I've heard."

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Si Titran wrote:

Dark... ah then I will have to find those.... I do have many.

Sounds great big_smile
Can't wait to read them.

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Yeah.. the only thing is they're not "typed" on a working computer.  I'll have to find the written copies... some where amongst my "creative chaos." But if y'all are interested I shall find them.

Meat is murder...... tasty tasty murder.
"Suggestion: Electrocution works well. Evisceration and Decapitation are also effective, or um, so I've heard."

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Hmm, at least the chaotic area of wherever they are is resulted from something creative. Mines just due to a lack of determination to find a place for a bunch of stuff

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Wow, I like the poems people smile  I'm not very good at writing poetry, and like AA, I never really got into it, but all of yours are really creative.  Keep up the good work, and I look forward to reading more big_smile

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How do you meam Sev? Who really is fett ll? And yes valthonin, i do talk to her about it. her smoking really makes my life suck. But she is going to try again, on Monday big_smile

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Thanks To Si I can say post what i said to my Valentine on Valentine's Day:

They say you only fall in love once but when i see you i fall in love all over again

Made by JD *(ME)*

LEELA: I know you like cooking shows, but you're a robot. You don't even have a sense of taste!
BENDER: Honey, I wouldn't talk about taste if I was wearing a lime green tank top.

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Aww, thats cute, wish I had a guy say that to me tongue

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cloneapart wrote:

Aww, thats cute, wish I had a guy say that to me tongue

I agree whole heartedly. Here's something for AA.

Leave me,
As untouched porcilen
Rather for the best
Because I know what we would end up
Being the conclusion here,
And I want something better for your future.
I can not tear apart your world apart for my own sake
I might even stop you from your self here
Better to leave everything else you've left unsaid
Locked behind the tounge
Even desired so by my ears
I would just rip this hope; life apart
Seperate you from what has been confessed to me as a great love
I'll be the one that makes you lose joy in your ambitions and work,
Bring out that beaten down person,
Once everything is said and done.
It would all start here
If I agreed with this absurd kiss
Mostly made of sleeplessness
The current dependancy suits our needs to such detail
In a great balance
No, I'll move on and forget everything each of us has said
As long as I know that you're willing to do the same
And this will never have happened.
I worked it out, over the years
Even, prepaired for every situation
So, even though this hurts
Please be willing to trust me
When I explain how it's better my way,
For the both of us.

((sorry for any bad spelling mistakes))

Meat is murder...... tasty tasty murder.
"Suggestion: Electrocution works well. Evisceration and Decapitation are also effective, or um, so I've heard."

38 (edited by Adeptus_Astartes Monday, February 18, 2008 6:04 pm)

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Thats nice, but sad, when did you write it?(If you don't mind me asking)

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Deep. I like. Can't wait to read more from you, Si.

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That poem I must have wrote sometime between... July 2001 through. October 2006. I know that's a broad time frame... but I know with certaintly who this poem was about and that was our relationship's time frame.

I'm glad you like it A_A and Dave!

Meat is murder...... tasty tasty murder.
"Suggestion: Electrocution works well. Evisceration and Decapitation are also effective, or um, so I've heard."

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Si Titran wrote:

That poem I must have wrote sometime between... July 2001 through. October 2006. I know that's a broad time frame... but I know with certaintly who this poem was about and that was our relationship's time frame.

I'm glad you like it A_A and Dave!

Sounded like a tough one for you. Hope life makes you happier now.

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YAY! She's stopped smoking everyone! This is thursday and she has not had even one! ( recorded applause ) big_smile tongue

You're foolish words can never hurt me

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JustDave wrote:
Si Titran wrote:

That poem I must have wrote sometime between... July 2001 through. October 2006. I know that's a broad time frame... but I know with certaintly who this poem was about and that was our relationship's time frame.

I'm glad you like it A_A and Dave!

Sounded like a tough one for you. Hope life makes you happier now.

It does, thank you.

Hurrah for no smoking!

Meat is murder...... tasty tasty murder.
"Suggestion: Electrocution works well. Evisceration and Decapitation are also effective, or um, so I've heard."

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HA-ZAAAA!!!!! ( shouts and stomps with pleasure! ) ( lol, sorry, .........had to. )





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I hope I'm not being a hog here. I wrote this one last night. This is as close to sweet as I think I've ever come.

The song played softly
In the cold night
The vision of a future
So close, almost to the touch
Quiet from voices
Just two entiwined in dance
Holding each other tenderly
There is no one else
After all, the day is through
And theirs is now to each other.

Meat is murder...... tasty tasty murder.
"Suggestion: Electrocution works well. Evisceration and Decapitation are also effective, or um, so I've heard."

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Thats pretty cool. Again, poetry is not something I like a lot. But this is good smile

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Thanks terra. I just thought of this now, but its the complete opposite from the 2nd poem I posted.

Meat is murder...... tasty tasty murder.
"Suggestion: Electrocution works well. Evisceration and Decapitation are also effective, or um, so I've heard."

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Why does the wind, keep it's name?
Why is the world, always the same?

What will you do, if the birds stop singing?
What will will you do, if the bell stops ringing?

I answer simply yes, that will happen soon
The world is already there...................

The swing has stopped
The person has stopped

There is no one there anymore
The memory is so sore

Alas, the time has come...........

You're foolish words can never hurt me

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Very good Green.  That is a really good poem.  It flowed for most of it but at some times it seemed awkward to read.  Other than that very good!

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Thanks, I just made it up, because I'm not very good at poetry, lol. Thanks, anyway smile

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