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Is there a planet on the chiss system that has water, where Kharn could be picked up by the rebels? so i dont need to edit again.
Last edited by Adeptus_Astartes (Monday, December 17, 2007 7:01 pm)
(im sure there is but, i dont know the name of it.)
AMELICO: LOCAL STARPORT: HANGER BAY OF THE GUARDIAN SOL
Daybreak arrives and I'm waiting patiently for the Satarin named Zoncxs. The local starport is fairly busy, with a lot of the Amelican settlers and merchant traders selling their goods and services. It's fairly peaceful here, not as chaotic as Coruscant, but not as secluded as my birthplanet of Myrkr. I know the intel's reliable, a happy drunk will spill his guts easily for a few more drinks down his gullet. Of course, my prey had no reason to believe himself in danger, so he had no reason to hide. And this fancy yacht I'm standing near isn't the sort of thing you'd leave behind on the run. I had a good lead on the guy. I wait. He'll be here. A few techs pass in and out, apparently installing the last of the owner's modifications and stocking his supplies.
<Not soon, enough> I think. <Skywalker's waiting for me. I hope he doesn't do anything too drastic in my absense. The young looking strange fellow in the Chiss clawcraft worries me. I don't know how he'd managed 3,000 plus years in cryostasis. A unique case indeed. I'm going to have to do this quickly to deal with the other issues obviously popping up in my absence. As soon as I get off planet, I'll take this ship to the edge of this system and contact Glitch through my holonet relay to rendezvous with us for a prisoner transfer, lock our friend nice and tight with a few ysalamiri neighbors for company and a nice ride to Coruscant aboard the Wayward Soul. I might even slave his nav computer to my own for the ride, if I feel generous. That's the plan.>
My musings are interrupted by the long awaited arrival. He's tall and young. He looks more human than Satarin to me, but then as a Twilek, they all look alike to me. He walks over, obviously nervous about my unexpected visit.
"Ummmm...can I help you?" he asks. He looks like he might run any second, or pull out the lightsabers hanging from his belt. No need to hide that here, I think. My presence is still minimized in the force. It's something I learned to do early on as a young boy amid force hunting predators on Myrkr. It comes so easily.
"Yes, I was informed you may be able to help me. I'll need a ride to Coruscant..."
Last edited by virulent_messiah (Monday, December 17, 2007 8:34 pm)
(ohh. playing that card will yah? well then...lets play.)
*ZONCXS*
as i stand there starring into the eyes of this creature I scan him to see if anything was a mist, alast i sensed nothing out of the ordinary. " So then, you wish to go to coruscant?"
<why has this man come to me about such things? who has told him about me leaving? was he standing at the docks waiting for some one to leave and ask them? no. that is not the case here. there are a couple of other ships here, some even more roomy than mine. he picked me and stood here all this time. how long has it been? how badly does he want to go to Coruscant? or is it something else? if i am to travel with such a fellow i need to keep my eyes and mind open. " trust only myself for no one else will"? Yuan, your words are always right. but i can't say no. if i say no then he might suspect me knowing that he is here for me, even if he isn't here for me he might be a theif. no I have to asume he is here to capture me. but who would want me? the chiss should have no reason to do such a thing since were no where near the system for them to try something like that. who could it be? a bounty? no. i have no enemies, i made peace with everyone i had ever met. that leaves only one person, luke skywawlker. he must have felt my presence when i was entering Amelico space and sent someone to retreive me. i must asume he can use the force to his will cause luke knows what i am capable of and wouldn't send a non force user to capture some one of my level. this guy is good. to come to me and ask tha i take him to the man that wants me while making it seem like he doesn't use the force. this is perfect, i can get into leagues with luke, find out whats going on. and report to the chiss so i have no more debts.>
"i will take you to Coruscant.: I say with a smile, < I will play your game, young one...>
He stares at me, obviously suspicious. He's good not to trust. I feel a slight probing in the force, he's searching for something. <Maybe he knows,> I think <or maybe he's overly cautious. I would be too if I were exiting Chiss space around the time the Rebellion had fled there. I'm not sure the rebels had any force users. I assumed they'd believed Skywalker to be the last of his kind. Of course the rest of us were in hiding. Maybe Skywalker's bravery to face the Old Empire head on does say something about his character. It's too bad he allowed his grief over years of war to justify his desperate take over. Maybe there's hope...>
My prey stares as though he was the hunter. I give him nothing. He conceeds, but remains suspicious.
"I will take you to Coruscant," he says, and smiles. It's dangerous. <Perhaps this prey has more hunter in him than I'd expected,> I think. I'm intrigued, but I don't want to lose my advantage, yet...
"Thank you," I say. "I'm in a bit of a rush, so as soon as your ready will be fine. I'll even pay extra. How much for a trip to Coruscant, anyway?"
Last edited by virulent_messiah (Tuesday, December 18, 2007 9:26 pm)
I sit down to lunch with ten other 'PeaceKeepers'. As I lift another spoonfull of MessRoom surprise into my mouth, an alarm sounds off outside the mess room. A the solider next to me moans, and put his head in his hands. " Thats the 5th one today" he groans. The rest of the Peace Keepers there nod. I just sit there and smile, as I eat the purple mush infront of me with vigor. The others begin to stare, and put there hands to there mouths. "How can you eat that shizz?" asks Frazle, a demolition expert who I met two days ago. I just shrug, and say a soldier will eat anything. But they keep stareing, and push there trays of food away in disgust. More for me. Theres a distant sound of explosion, and another alarm. I smile again.
Last edited by Mandal_ShadowWarrior (Tuesday, December 18, 2007 1:54 pm)
(Am I the only i one left????
And would you mind greatly if I sort of oh....made up a planet or moon? Just for the next bunch of posts, until the people at the rebel base rescue me *HINT HINT NUDGE NUDGE*)
Kharn raised his lightsaber, yet again. The blade hummed. There it was again. The large fish hiding in underground tunnels underneath the beach. He hoped the creature wouldent look up again, it was tense he could tell. Kharn reached out, trying to calm the large serpentine fish. He could feel its discomfort, and he saw its eyes flick up quickly, and saw its muscles bunch for the quick backwards thrust. Kharn slamed the lightsaber down. He had been hunting this damn fish all day, and all he had to show for it were holes in the rock. He had set multiple traps in many of the tunnel openings, he had seen the entrances to this tunnel system that ran under the submerged part of the beach as he brought the Clawcraft up to shore.
Kharn's hyperdrive was shot, so all he could do was try to escape, and die of old age. He had seen birds and other creatures in the distance, he would hunt for them soon, but now, he decided to pull the Clawcraft onto shore, before it rusted. As he landed he thumbed a small distress signal. As he began to pull himself out, he noticed a small nerf-leather holster. He took it, and set it with the rest of his armor. It was too hot, he had stripped down gradualy to the point where was just wearing part of the leggings. He went to check his traps, and found that some of them had caught small fish, but not the one he had tried to catch. It was a smart one. He had seen its relatives in the ocean.
Last edited by Adeptus_Astartes (Tuesday, December 18, 2007 6:39 pm)
Some of the others are getting irritated because of all my smileing, they decided to pick a fight. Four of the peace keepers from the other table come on over and sit, with one of them on either side of me. "What are you so happy about?" one askes gruffly, who is obviously the leader of the group. "Nothing," I reply. "Just had a good day."
"A good day of what?" askes another, shouldering me.
"A good day of not getting your face shoved up my ass." I reply sharply. The leader growls and leaps at my throat, knocking me off the bench, and sending me to my back with him on top of me. I reach up grabing his hands. Trying to keep from getting strangled. The man is much bigger than me, and his weight is crushing my chest. I try and breath but its hard, I bring my knee up in to his stomach, knocking the wind from him and letting me throw him off. I stand up gasping for air. But one of the mans buddys grabs me from behind and holds me while another can pound me in the gut. Its a bad thing i didnt put on my armor for lunch. A blaster shot goes off, sending everyone to the floor. I look up groggily and see that its another peace keeper, one in full combat armor, with a smokeing rifle pointed at the ceiling. Before I black out, I can see two gloved hands reaching for me...
Name: Jolee Jinn
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Force Powers: Very good at using the Force, and he has all of the Jedi force moves along with a couple Dark Side powers that he has learned. I'll surprise you with them later
(I'd prefer not to be so surprised, Appo. I'd like to know what specific powers Jinn has, if you don't mind. Prevents any future issues. I don't want all-powerful force users. We all have weaknesses...)
Luke Skywalker was not in the best of moods today. Since the new High Inquisitor had departed, he'd dealt with too many intrusions. Taking control of the former Empire was not a decision he would have like to have had to make. He felt it was the only way he could prevent any further Galactic Civil War. It hurt him even more deeply that his friends in the Alliance had abandoned him. Even his own sister, Leia had told him he was making a mistake. He felt in the force what he thought was right. Now with all these problems he had his doubts.
"Overlord Skywalker," said a young and worried looking officer over his comm, "you have...ummm...someone wants to speak with you..."
"Make an appointment..." Skywalker said.
"He...um...demanded to be brought to you, Overlord...ummm...sir." The officer sounded very worried now,"He killed two of our officers to get to me...he looks angry...and he's holding a light...ummm...saber?"
"Sigh...On my way..." Skywalker rose from his desk and left the room at a rapid pace, robes as black as his temper, flailing behind him as Peacekeepers moved to clear from his path.
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(I'm posting as Jolee Jinn too, Appo...)
"He's...umm...on his way, Sir..." the young officer, a Lieutenant named Farr said, "can you...ummm...deactivate...the weapon..."
"Once I'm sure it's Skywalker and not some trap." Jolee Jinn said, lightsaber blade still close to Lt. Farr's neck.
"I've killed enough Peacekeepers today."
The sound of the door hissing open interrupted the exchange.
"Yes, yes you have. Perhaps we can speak in private?" Overlord Skywalker was quick to cover his emotions before the intruder.
"Why not here?" asked Jinn.
"Because my Lieutenant has work to do today, and this effects Peacekeeper morale. I'm sure we can both reach an agreement that would satisfy all parties involved." Skywalker was all calm and relaxed, his voice smooth and even.
"I...I...see..." Jolee Jinn felt far more relaxed now, and was very willing to talk to Skywalker. "Yes...all parties...that...would...be...nice"
"Good..." Skywalker smiled.
The two force users left Lt. Farr rubbing his slightly burned neck. He could still smell his burnt neck hair in his nostrils. Skywalker paused and turned around.
"Lieutenant?" He asked.
"...ummmm...yes...yessir...umm...Overlord Skywalker, sir?" Lieutenant Farr heard rumors amid some of the other Peacekeeper officers that Skywalker was somehow related to Vader. The thought frightened him.
"I want you to collect the officers on duty at the sensor, communication, tractor beam, and forcefield control stations at the time of this particular guests arrival..." Skywalker paused, waiting for the Lieutenants confirmation.
"Umm...yessir..." Lt. Farr acknowledged.
"...and inform each of them..." Skywalker paused again for emphasis.
"...yes...ummm...Overlord?..."
"...of their demotions to latrine and kitchen duty..." Skywalker continued.
"gulp...umm yes, sir" the Lieutenant gulped loudly.
"...effective immediately..." Skywalker smiled.
"Yes...yessir...O-Overlord Skywalker, sir." the Lieutenant appeared both relieved and upset at the same time.
"Next time, I may not be so generous, Lieutenant." Skywalker turned and left, visitor in tow.
"Yessir..." Lt. Farr stammered.
Last edited by virulent_messiah (Tuesday, December 18, 2007 9:13 pm)
"I won't charge, this is the first time i have ever taken anyone somewhere."
<once we are on board i will activate the scanners to make sure no one is following us in space, the last thing i need is more than one on my tail. i will make the computer keep tabs on his motion when inside, and when he goes to his small room i will watch him on the screen in at the cockpit. there is no hidding in my ship. If you are up to something i will find out, and you won't even know. >
"we can leave now, I was on my way today, going the Coruscant. I wanted to meet people down there and explore a little more" I smile once more.
<let him see it, see that i know something, let him fall into my trap. no one, not even my master has ever been able to outsmart me in tatics, i hold all the cards and blocked all the doors except the ones i want you to see.>
we eneter the ship. " you can sleep in here. its not much but cozy none the less." i Point him towards his room.
Last edited by Zoncxs (Wednesday, December 19, 2007 7:29 am)
(Ok, im going to give this 1st person stuff a try)
I stand, almost completely still. My lightsaber's hilt is about a foot above the water. The fish pulls up, then, more quickly as if the damn thing had been anticipating me it looks up. I see its muscles begin to tense "Not this time." I say, as I activate the blade. It rushes out, hiting the fish right at the back of the skull. It begins to twitch and shake in death, and I manage to pull it out of the water, its large, and heavy. The meat should last until someone finds me. After I place the fish near my things, I run and check to see if the distress signal is on. It is. I return, and begin to skin the fish, I will be eating well tonight.
(Damn... 1st person perspective shift! Everyone's doing it now? I'm honored, I really am. Let's not get carried away though. It gets confusing... Excellent story so far guys! keep up the good work!)
(I dont like it back to 3rdfor me 
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Name: Hisuke Ichimura
Age: 26
Species:Cyborg kaleesh (wearing the skull of a karabac)
Gender:Male
Lightsaber: crimson dual blade
Craft: Modified sith infiltrator
Force abilities: choke, force drain, lightning, heal, push,pull,poison, paralyze,kill(only on animals), mind trick, beast mind trick,speed,repair, and jump
Armor: black robes with titanium steel spiked shoulder pads
History: Once a sith at the beginning of the clone wars. he killed again and agian at the emperors orders, and by doing so coming across the infamous Delta squad killing them all he took their armor as a souveneir. He soon caught wind of what the Emperor was doing though and fled the reaches of the separatists to an asteroid feilod where he set down his infiltrator and shut everything down and hopped into his cryotube. approximately 50 years later he was awoken by an alarm that rangoff when a small asteroid hit the hull of his ship
Now heading out to his homeplanet of Kalee Hisuke sees he is being followed by an unknown craft, he speeds up his boosters and brings his sheilds up just in case, but only angeers the pursuing fighter. An alarm blares throughout the ship and a hull breach sign flashes on his hull display panel. Deciding the enemy has too great blastersfor his ship's sheilds to handle he stops. As soon as he does he recieves a transmission."You will submit to the Peacekeepers will" His ship is then beamed aboard a capitol cruiser that has just jumped out of hyper space.
Last edited by Sevdelta07 (Thursday, December 20, 2007 2:35 pm)
(ZONCXS SEV! SOME ONE PICK ME UP...or should I just fly off on my own?)
(Zoncxs is leaving amelico thats in wild space, Ne'kad is on a moon near chiss space. I cant come and get you, sorry.)
(I was hoping i could make up a small drifiting planet that was close to the moon Ne'kad is on)
(Alrighty)
Getting out of his seat he went to the bay and let down the platform. soldiers of some sort were circled around hi ship in a capture formation. he would not be taken by anyone. One of the soldiers stepped forward and said "We'll need to hold you and search your ship" Hisuke thinking of a less violent way to escape then cutting them all down put his hand down at his side by his saber hiding most of it then waved hishand and muttered "you do not need to hold me or my ship here" the soldier in response said" Let him go boys hes cleacn, nothing rebel about this one" getting back aboard his ship he saw he had a distress beacon flashing not too far from here, he decided tp pick up and fly over there.About an hour later Hisuke arrived at a small moon of sorts where the beacon was emanating from pulling his ship down onto the planet he hopped aboard his sith speeder and typed in the coordinates of the distress beacon. when he got there hre saw a lone figure next to a shiphe sped up and headed over to the figure.
Kharn could feel the taint radiating off this man, he had become quite skilled at putting on his armor quickly and he did, pulling the helmet on last. He drew his double bladed lightsaber. "Stop sith!" He comanaded in as strong a voice as he could muster.
( posted the mods on my ship in my first post for all to see. the twoo at the bottom where added while in game play.)
"Lower your weapon master jedi I mean you no harm I recieved a distress beacon emanating from this region and came to rescue you, besides I am no longer a SITH LORD, I have long since changed my ways since the collapse of the CIS forces upon themselves. Now hop aboard quickly, we need to head to coruscant."
((Sevdelta07, how did your character kill delta squad?))
(sory SD07, i cant let you do that, it would kill Kharn's future 
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"Liar." Kahrn hised, as he charged. The sith was faster then he thought, and raised his saber quickly. Kharn deactivated one of the blades as it passed the Sith's reactivating it as soon as it was clear. The sith dodged the suprise attack. Kharn pushed him back with the force, and managed to disarm him. He kicked the knee, bringing him down. Kharn snapped his saber into two parts, as he had made it to do so. He held them up looking into the sith's eyes, and with a quick twist of his wrists, sent them at the sith in a strike that would decapitate him. The sith leaned back, changing the would be decapitation to a burn on his neck. He fliped back to his speeder and retrived his saber with the force, and fled. Kharn looked down, and in the water, saw his reflection. Something was wrong with his eyes.
(A gruesome story but I am glad you asked they had just been recently assigned to take out CIs leaders on Utapau hoping to find them there they instead ran into my character, choking the first one to come around the corner to death [Boss], he then jumped up with dual blade lightsaber in hand and sliced down the two nearest [Scorch and Fixer] he then had the task of taking out sev who through down a proximity mind, my charcter then set it off using the force, running through the smoke he stabbed into the last one left [Sev].)
You will pay dearly for that Jedi scum bag running back to his sith infiltrator to modify his ship and lightsaber so as not to fall victim to the same attack again. Firing up the engines of his Infiltrator he headed to Tatooine for some ship modifications.When he got there he looked around for an old freind of his and headed down over to that area when he got there he saw a young human boy at the counter, He asked where Traxus was the pointed out back, Hisuke walked outside into the blistering heat again to see Traxus signing for some new parts ."Traxus old buddy I need some new parts can you help me out here", "sure ,sure just lemme sign this real quick" the twilek finished up and said "whaddya need" afew hours later Hisuke had all the parts necessary to ourun mostly any ship he had acouple of Traxus' slaves to help carry the parts over to the hangar his ship was docked in paid each of them for helping and got to work, when he was done he had a marvelous thing to look at, with a hyper drive rating of 0.2 and backup hyperdrive class of 0.5, 2 0.2 class hyperdrives attached to 6 tion Mil/Sci Mil Star IV engines and CES x41 maneuvering thrusters, an advanced nav system with just about every star chart in the galaxy programmed in, a max speed of 2,080 km/h [1,280 km/h (atomospehere)]
particle and shift sheild systems installed meaning that no torpedo nor lasercannon could scratch his hull not even in hyperspace, 2 triple cannon front mounted blasters, 2 front-bottom mounted autocannons,4 side mounted turbo laser cannons 2 on each side, 2 side mounted ion cannons both on the left side, and on the rear bottom parts of the ship a concussion missile launcher, an energy torpedo launcher, and a proton torpedo launcher, all with friespary capability, now all he had to do was modify his lightsaber
Last edited by Sevdelta07 (Thursday, December 20, 2007 3:30 pm)
Hmmm.How is he an old partner of Obi wan when he is only 23???? huh?
You will pay dearly for that Jedi scum bag running back to his sith infiltrator to modify his ship and lightsaber so as not to fall victim to the same attack again. Firing up the engines of his Infiltrator he headed to Tatooine for some ship modifications.When he got there he looked around for an old freind of his and headed down over to that area when he got there he saw a young human boy at the counter, He asked where Traxus was the pointed out back, Hisuke walked outside into the blistering heat again to see Traxus signing for some new parts ."Traxus old buddy I need some new parts can you help me out here", "sure ,sure just lemme sign this real quick" the twilek finished up and said "whaddya need" afew hours later Hisuke had all the parts necessary to ourun mostly any ship he had acouple of Traxus' slaves to help carry the parts over to the hangar his ship was docked in paid each of them for helping and got to work, when he was done he had a marvelous thing to look at, with a hyper drive rating of 0.2 and backup hyperdrive class of 0.5, 2 0.2 class hyperdrives attached to 6 tion Mil/Sci Mil Star IV engines and CES x41 maneuvering thrusters, an advanced nav system with just about every star chart in the galaxy programmed in, a max speed of 2,080 km/h [1,280 km/h (atomospehere)]
particle and shift sheild systems installed meaning that no torpedo nor lasercannon could scratch his hull not even in hyperspace, 2 triple cannon front mounted blasters, 2 front-bottom mounted autocannons,4 side mounted turbo laser cannons 2 on each side, 2 side mounted ion cannons both on the left side, and on the rear bottom parts of the ship a concussion missile launcher, an energy torpedo launcher, and a proton torpedo launcher, all with friespary capability, now all he had to do was modify his lightsaber
I miss punctuation and capitalization.
Last edited by Adeptus_Astartes (Thursday, December 20, 2007 7:42 pm)
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