1 (edited by Kandosii Mando Verd Friday, December 1, 2006 8:00 am)

Topic: Star Wars Unusal Allies

Okay, i couldn't wait any longer and I have to be somewhere later on soooo, here ya go.
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CHAPTER ONE

Fateful night



REPUBLIC TRANSPORT
TIME; 18:00



" I don't like the looks of this, Master." Kamari Jade said worryingly," We've lost contact with the Jedi Temple, and the their is no response to our transmission." Hija Marsder paced the room." What can you make of the Request for all Jedi to Return?."

" It's a encrypted Code, i don't have the right equitment to bypass the programing."

This troubled her deeply. What was going on? No ordinary person dared to bother the Jedi. She had recieved no Reply from Master Windu in over a month, and when she asked for the Jedi Archives, the droid said it was unavalible.

" Wait a minute, Master." Kamari said." I've hacked into the Republic Securiy Cameras, acessing it's recent history." Her eyes widened," Master, i think you should see this."
Hija stood beside her Padawan, gazing upon the Temple view-screens. They moved to show a small group of Jedi younglings scampering down the hall. A cloaked figure met them at the other end. All was silent intill one spoke." Master Skywalker, They're attacking from all postions. What are we going to do?." Anakin's said nothing, but his saber ignited. The younglings flinched.

" Master Skywalker, what are you do-" He was cut off by a Saber being thrust through his stomach.

Hija had to look away. Kamari finished watching the tape with a grim expression. Hija struggled for a quick exit to the bunks. Kamari stayed in the Cockpit a little longer before switching it to auto-pilot. When she entered bunks Hija was streched out on one of the beds chewing her lip thoughfully.

Kamari desided that it was best to leave her Master in peace, She turned to leave.

" Don't go."

" I do not wish to disturb you, Master."

" Can you feel it? "

" What is it, Master? "

" A tremor in the Force."

Hija's face arose from the pillow, her eyes were red and her hair was matted." They're gone, Master Yoda, Windu, Kenobi."

Kamari swallowed Hard." How can one Jedi kill the Masters so quickly?."

Hija was about to answer when Kamari's communicator beeped loudly." Incoming Unknown Vessel." Kamari and Hija raced to the cockpit.

" Who is it? " Hija asked.

" It's a Republic Assualt Ship. Mabye they know what happened at the temple."

" Send them a Transmission, premission to come aboad."

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Bal kote, Darasuum kote. Jorso'ran kando a tome - And glory, eternal glory, We shall bear it's weight together.

Re: Star Wars Unusal Allies

Kandosii Mando Verd I loved your story Unusual Allies. It along with Dark Lord: Rise of Darth Vader are the only to stories I like involving the Great Jedi Massacre. I can't wait to see the next chapter I bet you could get it published when your finished with it.

"Ke nu'jurkadir sha Mando'ade.-Don't mess with Mandalorians."-Kandosii Fett

Sa kyr'am Nau tracyn kad, Vode an.-Forged like the saber in the fires of death,brothers all.

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Wait no longer. big_smile





CHAPTER TWO

Open Fire




RAS-BATTLE-SCARED






Space. It was like going home. It was welcoming to Cody. It was like seeing a old friend that you had dared to fire upon only moments before. He sank down in one of the seats. He was tired, and Lord Vader had already ordered them Back to Corasaunt for a run-over of the temple. He had to admit that somtimes he wondered why he'd been born like this. What had he done to deserve this? Who had he angered? He knew his wasn't alone in thinking this, him and his Captian Tharkin often talked about what they would do after the war was over. But now they were to bent on believing that it wasn't. Him and Tharkin had been good friends since the events on Geonosis. Even if he was a bit mouthy somtimes.

They all were Vode. They would always be Vode. Not even the Republic could take that from them. Cody was about to dose off when the ship erupted with clicks and wirrs.

" Incoming Transmission." Tharkin said.

Cody stood.

" This is Jedi Master Hija Marsder. Requesting premission to come aboard."

They all must have shared the same thoughts. What the Heck was a Jedi doing out here?

" Repeat, This is Jedi Master Hija Marsder. Requesting to come aboard."

Cody sent a return transmission.

" Commander Cody of the RAS Battle-scared. What's you're situation General? "

" Hello, Commander. I'm intrested to know if you've heard of any rifts in the Jedi Temple Recently. We are unable to make a connection with the Counsel."

So, she didn't know of the prior events.

" No, ma'am." Cody said plainly, trying not to cause question. " We to have been away from the sector for great amounts of time and have heard nothing."

Clueless Jedi.

" Commander, Requesting that you're course be diverted to Corasaunt. We have to find out whats going on."

" Yes, ma'am. Right away ma'am."

Cody took a step back.

" Open fire."

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Bal kote, Darasuum kote. Jorso'ran kando a tome - And glory, eternal glory, We shall bear it's weight together.

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ah yes, that was awesome

"I'm just a simple man trying to make my way in the universe"

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Thank you!
I've still gotta start on the next part.

Oh, Joy! j/k j/k

I actually can't wait!.

Bal kote, Darasuum kote. Jorso'ran kando a tome - And glory, eternal glory, We shall bear it's weight together.

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Kandosii Mando Verd as I have said before you never cease to amaze me. You really do need to find someone to publish it when it is done and when it gets published I will be the first to one to get it.Vode Darasuum.

"Ke nu'jurkadir sha Mando'ade.-Don't mess with Mandalorians."-Kandosii Fett

P.S. When I first joined I didn't know what any of you would be like but now I am thinking of you as Vode Darasuum.

Sa kyr'am Nau tracyn kad, Vode an.-Forged like the saber in the fires of death,brothers all.

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You all truly are my Vode Darasuum.

Sa kyr'am Nau tracyn kad, Vode an.-Forged like the saber in the fires of death,brothers all.

Re: Star Wars Unusal Allies

Well, thank you Kandosii Fett. big_smile

Bal kote, Darasuum kote. Jorso'ran kando a tome - And glory, eternal glory, We shall bear it's weight together.

Re: Star Wars Unusal Allies

just finished ch8 of my story, im posting it right now, check it out!

"I'm just a simple man trying to make my way in the universe"

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Well its true ner vod you and me are vode darasuum

Sa kyr'am Nau tracyn kad, Vode an.-Forged like the saber in the fires of death,brothers all.

Re: Star Wars Unusal Allies

Vode Darasuum, Ner'vod. big_smile

Bal kote, Darasuum kote. Jorso'ran kando a tome - And glory, eternal glory, We shall bear it's weight together.

Re: Star Wars Unusal Allies

Vode Darasuum

Sa kyr'am Nau tracyn kad, Vode an.-Forged like the saber in the fires of death,brothers all.

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Man, i have such a bad habit for speaking Mandalorian. My dad's always like " As long as you're not speaking in some code or anything " * Rolls eyes *

Bal kote, Darasuum kote. Jorso'ran kando a tome - And glory, eternal glory, We shall bear it's weight together.

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My mom always asks me what im saying bcause ill call people ner vod or ill be talking mandolorian on the phone  she thinks im cussing or something so im trying to teach her the language

Sa kyr'am Nau tracyn kad, Vode an.-Forged like the saber in the fires of death,brothers all.

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I know the feeling. I remember playing empire at war and Calling someone a Hu'tuun Sheb. big_smile

Bal kote, Darasuum kote. Jorso'ran kando a tome - And glory, eternal glory, We shall bear it's weight together.

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Good story, I like it.

"Stop whining. Before you really get me irritated."
     --Boba Fett

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Great story, draws you in and doesn't let you go.  Keep it up.

[i]Like I told your captain, the orphange attacked me.  It was self-defense.[/i]  -Richard the Warlock  [url]http://archive.lfgcomic.com/lfg0002.gif[/url]

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Thank you, Sev Fett!. big_smile

Bal kote, Darasuum kote. Jorso'ran kando a tome - And glory, eternal glory, We shall bear it's weight together.

Re: Star Wars Unusal Allies

still anxiously waiting for the next part!! i love a good space battle

"I'm just a simple man trying to make my way in the universe"

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Alright Peoples!
Since all the posts say yesterday. It is now time for the next chapter. big_smile

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CHAPTER THREE

DOUBTFUL THINKING







Hija sat back with a calm resignation." Message is away. All we have to do i wait."   Kamari swallowed hard." Master, what have you been thinking these past few months we've been away? I've sensed disturbance in you."

Hija sighed." What has happened to the Jedi code, Kamari? We're peacekeepers, not soldiers."

" Do you think the counsel knew this was coming? "

Hija took sudden interest in the navagation charts." The Counsel knew many things, But i highly doubt even Master Yoda himself could've forsaw this."

Hija couldn't deny that she sometimes " Questioned " the Jedi counsel's decisons of action in the war. But what other choice did they have.

Kamari was more open then she could ever be.

" Master? What are we really fighting for? "

Hija turn to face her." Restoring the peace, wasn't i clear on this? "

" The way you made it sound was that You didn't trust the other Masters."

Hija stopped herself before she made matters worse. She smiled sadly.

" You are right, Kamari. I shall be more mindful of my actions."

They both fell silent for a moment. Each managing their own task such as checking the charts and scans on the ship.

Kamari broke the silence." You don't think the Republic is invovled somehow, do you? "

Hija pondered that for a few seconds." It's hard to tell what is going on in the senate, and i can hardly mark the Holoclip from the Temple anything less than disturbing."

There was a blinding light, and the ship rocked dangerously back and forth.

Hija had to seize the co-pilots seat just to stay upright.

Kamari struggled with the controls." Then why are they shooting at us?! "

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Bal kote, Darasuum kote. Jorso'ran kando a tome - And glory, eternal glory, We shall bear it's weight together.

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nice work! man the way you end it right when it gets interesting still gets me! lol

"I'm just a simple man trying to make my way in the universe"

Re: Star Wars Unusal Allies

That's how pro writers make it big. big_smile

Bal kote, Darasuum kote. Jorso'ran kando a tome - And glory, eternal glory, We shall bear it's weight together.

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hey kandosii, i just finished ch9 check it out!

"I'm just a simple man trying to make my way in the universe"

24 (edited by Kandosii Mando Verd Friday, December 15, 2006 11:38 am)

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Don't worry guys.
I'm coming back pretty soon.

I'm gonna start on the next chapter as soon as I get a Chance.

P.S  Uh, You guys know i'm a girl...right?  lol

Bal kote, Darasuum kote. Jorso'ran kando a tome - And glory, eternal glory, We shall bear it's weight together.