Topic: Fan-fic idea

I'm writing the Boba Fan-fic but i dont know if the plot is solid. It's my first fan-fic and I think it's horrible:( can someone help?

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Hmm, well I've never written a fan fic myself. Anyways what's the plot about??

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theres this girl, emmo, who's arranged to be married to jojo kast. shes a theripest and her newest client is boba fett. of corse fett hates jodo and visa-versa. jodo finds out and emmo warns fett. she has this huge crush on fett and he knows then vader comes in somehow and thats where i left off. i dont know whats gonna happen or if it even makes since.

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...Sounds pretty good, I think it'll turn out great, just figure out how Vader gets involved.
It will sound pretty weird if he just shows up... big_smile

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well thats how it happens lol. yeah i hope it does. I might post some of it later.

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Can't wait! smile

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Yay. thanks for the help. now i feel a little less nervous!

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Jodo comes after boba and in the middle of the greatest fight ever, vader walks in thinking, "This isn't where i parked my car..."

Good... Bad... I'm the one with the gun.
Hail to the King Baby!!

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lol thats cute:D and funny but i do know that vader is there because of fett, who he thinks is my boyfriend because of something he walks in on... no it's not that bad lol. i just wanna stay true to fett's character but make him my own!!! mwahahaha

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I'd read the fic after you finish it. smile

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K thanks and could you tell me what you thought and what i should change? I'd really apretiate that. big_smile

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I wanna know why Fett is in Therapy...

Good... Bad... I'm the one with the gun.
Hail to the King Baby!!

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He drinks lol I made it up! I was imaganing what it would be like if he was a drunk and I was thinking of story ideas so I just tied them together.

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Ah, I was thinking more like he was in therapy cause of his dad dying.

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thats why he drinks, his dad died.

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hi

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That was spam.

take it easy baby take it as it comes

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Ya, please don't try to bump your own topic if it starts to lose readers.

Good... Bad... I'm the one with the gun.
Hail to the King Baby!!

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k i didnt try jeeze lol

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20 (edited by Gojan Fett Wednesday, July 12, 2006 7:34 am)

Re: Fan-fic idea

Fetterthanyou wrote:

Jodo comes after boba and in the middle of the greatest fight ever, vader walks in thinking, "This isn't where i parked my car..."

That is absolutely hilarious! I love it!


Just be careful Sora that your fic doesn't turn into a sappy romance story. Romance is okay, but be sure to make any relationships are believable and creative. I don't know about the Fett drinking problem, most of the books say he doesn't drink.

What would be interesting was if started having a problem with maybe...nightmares of his past such as his father's death or innocent's he's killed, or something along those lines, and that the whole time he was in a session he was all angry he was there in the first place, and looked like he was going to bolt out of the room or shoot something at any second.

That could be very interesting. It would also be cool to see what a star wars therapist was like.

"A thousand years of space and time and I have never come across anyone wasn't important." -- Doctor Who

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Gojan Fett wrote:

That could be very interesting. It would also be cool to see what a star wars therapist was like.

Read the Medstar books, there's a SW therapist in those.

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Oh cool, I've been meaning to look those books too.  Thanks Miba!

"A thousand years of space and time and I have never come across anyone wasn't important." -- Doctor Who

23 (edited by Lady_Sora Wednesday, July 12, 2006 4:22 pm)

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In the begining he was mad to be in the session and he does walk out. Like i said before I want to stay true to his character but make him my own. I really like Fett but don't know how to make him in but out of character. He likes Emmo but doesn't want to show it.So I'm not trying to make it sappy. (I'd hate if I did that!)  As for the drinking thing, I know he doesn't drink, that I totally made up. He's not a raging drunk. And he drinks because of his father's death. Nightmares is a good thought too but I'd have to change most of the story...I might have to do that any way. And I still don't know how to tie Vader in!! GRRRR.

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I have a few ideas to tie in vader although my first idea still stands as my favorite =P

1. Vader wants boba for a job and asks Jodo by mistake. (common error)
2. You could have Jodo put an imperial bounty on Boba's head through Vader (unlikely but hey, ewoks beat the empire)
3. Boba dresses up like vader to scare of Jodo and win over the Psychiatrist, or Jodo dresses up like Vader to scare Boba, but instead they battle and the real Vader gets pissed at Jodo.(I have no idea where that came from)

Good... Bad... I'm the one with the gun.
Hail to the King Baby!!

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what if vader believes that emmo has a tie to the rebellion or something like that. you could say jodo killed a high-ranking imperial official and vader thinks boba did it but then boba tells vader that jodo did it and then they team up to kill kast.

is boba going to therapy in his armor? because i don't think he would do that unless he goes there with out his armor and then tells emmo his name.which would be more like him because if he showed up to therapy in his armor then the people think he's a wimp deep down and has a weak spot unless he drags some one kicking and screaming out of an office.

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